I'd be glad to beta read your story. I don't mind Mary Sues as long as
the story is good (I tend to make them too =^.^=; ). If you'd email it to
me ( silvercat@...
) and tell me how harsh you'd like me to be and
anything in particular you'd like me to focus on, I should be able to get it
done within a week or so.
- Silvercat's Nitpicking Paradise, home of
the Thunderkitties comic!
But father, I've beaten every single monster I've come up against. I'm the
most famous person in all of Greece. I'm-I'm an action figure!
- Hercules, Hercules
> Guten Tag, all!
> I go by Syreene, and I have been posting some of my short story work
> on fanfiction.net. I have two completed short stories based upon the
> X-Men that I would like to have reviewed if possible. Unfortunately,
> I have since discovered that I suffer from the 'Mary Sue' curse, but
> I really like the character I created, and want to make sure she
> doesn't suck too bad. ;)
> I also have a Cyberpunk/Matrix crossover story that I am working
> on. :)
> If anyone is interested in doing a serious critique, please e-mail me!