643req a beta reader HL/Stargte SG-1 crossover
- Jul 30, 2002Hello all: I would actually like someone to go over a previous
story that I wrote a good while ago, entitled "Echoes."
It's the first time I've written a story using the two characters
direct point of view. In this case, my OC Jeri Mckenna and Daniel
Jackson from Stargate. I normally write using third person, so this
was something of a departure for me. Basically I want to give the
story a complete overhaul, for things like flow, being too comma
happy, fragments and run-on-sentences, you know, technical stuff.
I'd like to give a bit of a polish before continuing on with the
brand new story "The Lost Ones." which is still in development.
Story One: "Echoes" can be found on my website
here's the direct URL for it (http://www.geocities.com/karrenia-
Summary: Jeri Mckenna is asigned to the SG-1 team and accompanies
them on a mission to the planet PCx-1553 where they discover
another Immortal has set herself up as the Moches' 'divine
The working summary on my next story "The Lost Ones" will
feature Methos. Where they discover the now long-abandoned
homeworld of the Immortals, and abandoned experiment in
cryogenics conducted by the Gou'ald, and doppleganger, or exact
duplicate of Methos. Is this 'twin' friend or foe, and what
does it mean for our Methos?
Still very much in development.
If any who is familar with both shows would like to give the
one story an overhaul; and once I finish the second story,
a beta read, please email me off-list.
Thanks and take care, Karrenia aka Karen
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