REPOST OR REI Desert Gaiter
- Hi Richard,
Thanks for your revisions. Report posted: https://tinyurl.com/mp2vvst
It was time for me to revise my Tester Info paragraph, and I've eliminated many of the altitude figures. I confirmed the correct spelling for willow brake here: http://www.thefreedictionary.com/brake The first brake entry has "An area overgrown with dense brushwood...". Colloquially, I've heard "brake" used to mean that the willow or brush "puts the brakes on your progress" trying to hike through :) Otherwise, I updated my text per all your other edits, good catches.