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Re: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval: OR - Jacks "R" Better Bear Mountain Hammock - Derek Hansen

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  • Derek Hansen
    Thanks Ray! All edits made. Regards, ~derek
    Message 1 of 4 , Apr 26, 2013
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      Thanks Ray! All edits made.

      Regards,

      ~derek

      On Apr 26, 2013, at 4:52 AM, Ray <rayestrella@...> wrote:

      > Hi Derek,
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      > Nice review. As a true side-sleeper I have been thinking about this one, thanks for writing it up. I have a few of edits, most of which a spell-checker should have caught. Once corrected you may place it at:
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      > Reviews > Shelters > Hammocks > Jacks R Better Bear Mtn Bridge Hammock
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      > See you down the trail,
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      > Ray
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      > *** It differs from traditional gathered-end hammocks by adding a spreader bar to each end, yet allowing the middle the drop,
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      > EDIT: "to" drop
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      > ***The Deluxe version features a pad sleeve that is accesible on the outside of the hammock.
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      > EDIT: accessible
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      > ***The pocket has an opening on one end that features a a small hook-and-loop tab
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      > EDIT: delete one "a"
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      > *** The pad sleeve is wide enough to accommodate most camping pads up to 26 in (6 cm) wide.
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      > EDIT: metric conversion wrong
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      > *** The webbing threads back trough a JRB metal tri-glide to secure and adjust the suspension.
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      > EDIT: back "through"
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      > *** I found that I shifted a little in the bed, sleeping a little off center with on shoulder laying more on the side walls than in the bed.
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      > EDIT: sleeping a little "off-center" with "one" shoulder
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