EDIT/Approval - NEMO Siren 30 - Ray Estrella
Another excellent Review, and thanks for tipping me off on NEMO quilts. Only a few edits, in the usual format; after revising you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/bgz8awe
<<I am quite impressed by the Siren, especially considering this was their first go at a backpacking quilt. >>
Edit: The case of the uncertain antecedent. "Nemo's first go" would add clarity.
<<The Siren is my first quilt to use box baffles.>>
Edit/Comment: Don't think so. Nunatak has box baffles. Square baffles maybe.
<<Personally I would not mind seeing the Siren have a little more down (or the
same amount, but higher fill power.) but I always have my custom quilts made
with extra in the top third of the quilt as I know I sleep a little cool.>>
EDIT: Delete the period inside the parentheses.