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Re: Edit/Approval: OR - Gary's Panforte Clif Bar - Richard Lyon

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  • richardglyon@att.net
    Ray, Thanks for the EDIT. I agree that the sentence was confusing so I re-did it. Duly uploaded and Tests/OR folder copy complete. Happy Labor Day, Richard
    Message 1 of 4 , Sep 3 7:34 AM
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      Ray,

      Thanks for the EDIT. I agree that the sentence was confusing so I re-did it. Duly uploaded and Tests/OR folder copy complete.

      Happy Labor Day, Richard



      --- In BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com, "Ray" <rayestrella@...> wrote:
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      > Hi Richard,
      >
      > Very nice review. These are pretty good bars. (Thank you for that;-) I find only one edit for you.
      >
      > You may place the corrected review at:
      >
      > Reviews > Food > Energy Bars and Drinks > Clif Bar Panforte flavor
      >
      > Ray
      >
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      > ***Either, and every other flavor that I've tried, is a treat and a calorie-provider thatboosts my energy as well as satisfies my palette.
      >
      > EDIT: need a space after "that".
      >
      > Plus you may want to look at this entire sentence. It really reads awkwardly because of the "and every other flavor that I've tried," inserted.
      >
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