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Re: EDIT/Approval - MSR GravityWorks - Ray Estrella

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  • richardglyon@att.net
    Ray, I should have given a better explanation. I wasn t suggesting that you hadn t covered the subject, just that a reference here (such as See below or
    Message 1 of 3 , Sep 3, 2012
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      Ray,

      I should have given a better explanation. I wasn't suggesting that you hadn't covered the subject, just that a reference here (such as "See below" or "Discussed in my Review") would enhance readability. Clearly style and up to you, though.

      Cheers, Richard

      --- In BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com, "Ray" <rayestrella@...> wrote:
      >
      > Hi Richard,
      >
      > Thank you for the edits and suggestions. All made but one.
      >
      > Ray
      >
      > --- In BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com, "richardglyon@" <montana.angler@> wrote:
      >
      >
      > > << Clean reservoir weight: 2.2 oz (62 g)
      > > (In case it is used with smaller bottles.)>>
      > > Edit – You might cross-reference your discussion of using other Platy
      > > products here.
      >
      >
      > I address this later in the review.
      >
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