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Re: Edit/Approval: OR - Kakadu Kelly CC Vest - Kathy Waters

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  • Ray
    Oh, no, I just hadn t deleted it as I was going through. All is good. Ray
    Message 1 of 6 , Jul 3, 2012
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      Oh, no, I just hadn't deleted it as I was going through. All is good.

      Ray

      --- In BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com, "Kathy Waters" <kathy@...> wrote:
      >
      > Ray,
      >
      > One more to go <g>... unless some other editor beats you to it.
      >
      > Made the correction and deleted the test file, but before I upload, was there an edit attached to the last sentence?
      >
      > Thanks,
      > Kathy
      >
      > ----- Original Message -----
      > From: Ray
      > To: BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com
      > Sent: Tuesday, July 03, 2012 12:11 PM
      > Subject: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval: OR - Kakadu Kelly CC Vest - Kathy Waters
      >
      >
      >
      > Hi Kathy,
      >
      > Thanks for another review. Here are some edits for this one. Once corrected you can place it with John's review at:
      >
      > Reviews > Clothing > Jackets > Kakadu Kelly CC Vest
      >
      > Ray
      >
      > *** The "CC" in the product style name translates to "concealed carry"
      >
      > Comment: it is more accurate to say "stands for" instead of translates
      >
      > *** Depending on the purpose, different canvas weights are used : 5 oz (142 g)
      >
      > EDIT: there is a space after "used" that needs to go away
      >
      > *** I have found though the Kelly is too warm for me
      >
      > Edit: I have found though "that" the Kelly is too warm for me
      >
      > ***I've worn the Kelly on at least a dozen backpacks
      >
      > EDIT: a dozen backpacking trips
      >
      > The Kelly CC Vest is trim, hides dirt well and hasn't show any signs of wear after a year of abuse. I think I'll keep it and maybe get another one - loden green, maybe?
      >
      >
      >
      >
      >
      > [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
      >
    • Kathy Waters
      Fine. I m getting dizzy from looking at reports in the heat. Thanks, Kathy ... From: Ray To: BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com Sent: Tuesday, July 03, 2012
      Message 2 of 6 , Jul 3, 2012
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        Fine. I'm getting dizzy from looking at reports in the heat.

        Thanks,
        Kathy

        ----- Original Message -----
        From: Ray
        To: BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com
        Sent: Tuesday, July 03, 2012 2:47 PM
        Subject: [BackpackGearTest] Re: Edit/Approval: OR - Kakadu Kelly CC Vest - Kathy Waters



        Oh, no, I just hadn't deleted it as I was going through. All is good.

        Ray

        --- In BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com, "Kathy Waters" <kathy@...> wrote:
        >
        > Ray,
        >
        > One more to go <g>... unless some other editor beats you to it.
        >
        > Made the correction and deleted the test file, but before I upload, was there an edit attached to the last sentence?
        >
        > Thanks,
        > Kathy
        >
        > ----- Original Message -----
        > From: Ray
        > To: BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com
        > Sent: Tuesday, July 03, 2012 12:11 PM
        > Subject: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval: OR - Kakadu Kelly CC Vest - Kathy Waters
        >
        >
        >
        > Hi Kathy,
        >
        > Thanks for another review. Here are some edits for this one. Once corrected you can place it with John's review at:
        >
        > Reviews > Clothing > Jackets > Kakadu Kelly CC Vest
        >
        > Ray
        >
        > *** The "CC" in the product style name translates to "concealed carry"
        >
        > Comment: it is more accurate to say "stands for" instead of translates
        >
        > *** Depending on the purpose, different canvas weights are used : 5 oz (142 g)
        >
        > EDIT: there is a space after "used" that needs to go away
        >
        > *** I have found though the Kelly is too warm for me
        >
        > Edit: I have found though "that" the Kelly is too warm for me
        >
        > ***I've worn the Kelly on at least a dozen backpacks
        >
        > EDIT: a dozen backpacking trips
        >
        > The Kelly CC Vest is trim, hides dirt well and hasn't show any signs of wear after a year of abuse. I think I'll keep it and maybe get another one - loden green, maybe?
        >
        >
        >
        >
        >
        > [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
        >





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