Edit/APPROVAL - Jacks 'R' Better Old Rag Mtn - Ed Morse
A few nits below. Fix them and you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/6qmhwmt
Thanks for your hard work on this OR, on what sounds to me like a very useful and durable basis for a sleep system.
p s Don't forget to delete your Tests folder copy. For future ORs, please post the html in the Tests/OR folder.
<<Since then I have made one and two week trips in Michigan, Maine, New Hampshire and Pennsylvania. >>
Edit: one- and two-week trips [two hyphens]
<<After trying a variety of pads I've settled on the Neoair when I use a tent.>>
<<As the temperature drops below about 50 F (27 C) I start adding more clothes under the quilt. >>
EDIT: (10 C)
<<With temperatures of 39 F the first night and 50 F the other two nights the quilt kept me warm while wearing wool socks, wool long johns and a long sleeve T shirt.>>
EDIT: Add both Celsius conversions
<<The nights on South Manitou Island were warm in late evening and down near
freezing by sun rise. >>
Edit: "sunrise" is usually one word
<<When the rain starts I add a sylnylon pack cover. >>
EDIT: silnylon [short for "silicone-impregnated nylon"]