EDIT: OR - Whiz Easy - Theresa Lawrence
- Hello Theresa,
Thank you for your Owner Review. You have done such a good job (with a difficult subject too) that I am going to forgo most of my newbie info as it looks like you found it all yourself.
Your initial edits will follow. They will take the following format;
EDIT: must be changed
Edit: should be changed but will be left to your discretion
Comment: just that or something to think about
When you have made the changes please repost here with REPOST added to the subject line. You can also put a HTML copy in the Owner Review Test Folder. It is found at the end of the list of reviews on the main page or here;
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Please let me have a link to the review or at least the name once you have it uploaded.
***Location: Sparwood, BC, Canada
EDIT: please spell out the state for the benefit of our international readers
***Activities I use my gear include mountaineering, ski touring, rock climbing,
EDIT: Activities I use my gear "with" include
***kayaking, biking, trail running, Search and Rescue and overseas travel.
Comment: like I say to all our SAR and Park Ranger members, thank you
*** Features include an antibacterial/ antifungal coating to ensure safe
and hygienic use
EDIT: actually it is not a coating, but is due to its "specially formulated TPE (Thermo Plastic Elastomer) material" according to the manufacturer
***The device was tested while on skis or wearing hiking boots
EDIT: so as not to confuse readers with our actual gear tests, please change "tested" to "used"
*** With the conditions being windy I made the useful observation ahead of time not to face into the wind. I believe this was the correct decision.
Comment: ha, love it (the interjection of lightness and humor adds a lot to a review in my opinion)
*** A word of advice, don't leave it around the house it makes men feel really
EDIT: this is projection and speculation. You don't know that all men will be grossed out by it. I know I am not (my ex has one). Maybe say that you have seen men (your hubby or friends) uncomfortable when you leave it out. Heck, just put it in a vase ;-)