EDIT: OR - Dublin Dog Black-Eyed Susan No Stink Collar - Alex Legg
- Hello again Alex. Thanks for taking the Call for Owner Reviews to heart. Here are the edits for this one.
Please repost when ready.
EDIT: you are missing it
***Size: Large - 17 in-21.5 (43 cm-55 cm) in circumference
EDIT: missing the "in" after 21.5
Another way to write these numbers would be 17-21.5 in (43-55 cm) and then you would not need it after each number. Your choice though.
***Available Sizes: Small - 11 in-14 in (28 cm-36 cm) circumference; 0.6 (2 cm) in band width. Medium - 12.5 in-17 in (32 cm-43 cm) circumference; 1 in (3 cm) band width. Large - 17 in-21.5 in (43 cm-55 cm)circumference; 1 in (3 cm) band width
Edit: I would change this to Other Sizes Available and drop the Large as you just listed it above.
***Color: Red and Black
EDIT: actually they don't list their collars by color except for the Solid Stripe series. Your color is Black Eyed Susan from the Daisy Daze series.
***Available Colors: Red and Black
EDIT: don't list what they have available as it is too much info and can be seen on the web-site.
***MSRP: Small-US $24.00; Medium-US $26.00; Large-US $28.00
EDIT: please list just the MSRP of the item you are reviewing, in this case the large
*** It is adorned with pretty little yellow and white flowers.
Comment, they are Black Eyed Susan's, hence the name
***It has a stainless steel belt buckle that leads to a plastic belt loop and then into a stainless steel belt loop where the dog tags are to be clasped on.
EDIT: delete the word "belt" as they are just buckles, or collar buckles, not belt buckles. The actual name of what is on the collar is a Single Tongue buckle
***The collar feels like a plastic,
EDIT: like a plastic what? Do you mean it feels like it is made of plastic?
***This Collar is on my dog all the time,
EDIT: collar (no cap)
*** The elevation is at around 2,000 ft (610 m), and the temperature ranges from 60 F (16 C)to 110 F
EDIT: need a space after (16 C)
***I have taken it off her to clean it with my thumbs under a water faucet, but thats it.
EDIT: but "that's" it
*** It doesn't smell like wet, stinky dog, or like my parents never clean me and we live on the street dog.
EDIT: I didn't get what you were trying to say at first. The way to express that is with hyphens; or like my-parents-never clean-me-and-we-live-on-the-street dog.
*** Considering the hundreds of miles Ebony has trekked
*** My dogs are not lazy lay around the house dogs.
EDIT: My dogs are not lazy lay-around-the-house dogs.