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Edit/Approval - Patagonia Women's Down Sweater - Frances Penn

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  • richardglyon@att.net
    Hi Frances, Ready for the big leagues! After making the corrections noted below, you re good to upload to http://tinyurl.com/7dtapvp Don t forget to delete
    Message 1 of 1 , Feb 1, 2012
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      Hi Frances,

      Ready for the big leagues! After making the corrections noted below, you're good to upload to http://tinyurl.com/7dtapvp Don't forget to delete your Tests folder copy.

      In future postings, would you please include the tinyurl link above the plain text of your report. Also, Owner Reviews have their own folder: Tests/Owner Reviews. That's where test copies of ORs should be posted.

      Same format as before – EDIT a required change, Edit a suggested change or request for clarification, and Comment a comment with no change required.

      Congratulations on completing your first Owner Review!

      Cheers, Richard

      <<EMAIL: fpenn@...>>
      Edit: You might want to write in the words instead of using symbols (AT instead of @), to discourage spam.

      <<Manufacturer: Patagonia>>
      EDIT: Here (and only here) it needs to be the full legal name: Patagonia, Inc.

      <<Measured Weight: 11 oz (312? g)>>
      EDIT: Delete the question mark.

      <<The nylon-bound elastic cuffs and drawcord hem seal in warmth and keep drafts out. >>
      EDIT: to seal in warmth

      <<Temperatures: 30s F to 40s F (-1 C to 4 C)>>
      EDIT: Here and in the other two trip summaries, drop the "s" (30 to 40 F, not 30s to 40s F). Or expand the Celsius to cover the 40s (which run from 4-10 C).

      <<Elevation: 9,500 ft to 11,000 ft (2,895 m to 3352 m)>>
      EDIT: As the Imperial is approximate, the metric should be too. 2900 to 3350 m
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