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Re: Edit/Approval: OR - Kleen Kanteen Classic - Alex Legg

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  • Ray
    ... OK, that makes sense. You credited them with the sentence then... ;-) Ray
    Message 1 of 6 , Dec 2, 2011
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      --- In BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com, "alex" <alexlegg2@...> wrote:

      > I actually do mean biological equivalent in reference to the plant
      > life that is seen along the highway.<snip> The sentence I wrote is
      > from the National Forest's description of the area.

      OK, that makes sense. You credited them with the sentence then... ;-)

      Ray
    • Jamie D.
      Must be a reference to one our Sky Islands . Just one more cool thing about AZ. jamie d
      Message 2 of 6 , Dec 2, 2011
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        Must be a reference to one our "Sky Islands". Just one more cool thing about AZ.

        jamie d

        --- In BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com, "alex" <alexlegg2@...> wrote:
        >
        > Ray, thank you for your time. In response to your edit:
        >
        > ***This road offers the biological equivalent of driving from the deserts of
        > Mexico to the forests of Canada.
        >
        > Edit: do you mean the geographical equivalent?
        >
        > I actually do mean biological equivalent in reference to the plant life that is seen along the highway. It starts in the Sonoran Desert among the saguaros and the ocotillo and ends in a forest of ponderosa, oak, and mixed conifers. The sentence I wrote is from the National Forest's description of the area.
        >
        > Thanks again. I will look around to see what other items I have that I can review.
        >
        >
        >
        >
        >
        > --- In BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com, "Ray" <rayestrella@> wrote:
        > >
        > > Hi Alex,
        > >
        > > Thanks for the review. You are familiar with the procedure now, your edits are below.
        > >
        > > Once the changes are made you can place it at:
        > >
        > > Reviews > Hydration Systems > Bottles > Kleen Kanteen Classic
        > >
        > > Please delete your test files.
        > >
        > > Ray
        > >
        > >
        > >
        > > ***Listed Weight: 6 oz (170 g)
        > >
        > > EDIT: the listed weight is 6.1 oz without the cap.
        > >
        > >
        > >
        > > ***Actual Weight: 5.8 oz (164 g)
        > >
        > > EDIT: what is the total weight with the cap?
        > >
        > >
        > >
        > > ***Size: 27 oz (798 ml)
        > >
        > > EDIT: 27 "fl" oz
        > >
        > >
        > >
        > > ***MSRP: $19.95
        > >
        > > EDIT: "US" $19.95
        > >
        > >
        > >
        > > ***The lid opens much like the classic water bottle associated with bicycling.
        > >
        > > Comment: it would be better to say that the sport-cap opens much like the classic water bottle (it is not really a lid.)
        > >
        > >
        > >
        > > ***This road offers the biological equivalent of driving from the deserts of Mexico to the forests of Canada.
        > >
        > > Edit: do you mean the geographical equivalent?
        > >
        > >
        > >
        > > ***It is a 27 mile long trip one way
        > >
        > > EDIT: need the metric equivalent (km)
        > >
        > >
        > >
        > > ***The Kleen Kanteen has preformed as I expected.
        > >
        > > EDIT: performed
        > >
        > >
        > >
        > > ***2. metal construction causes it to heat up quickly in the sun.
        > >
        > > EDIT: capitalize Metal
        > >
        >
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