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Re: [BackpackGearTest] EDIT/Approval - Therm-A-Rest NeoAir - Lori Pontious

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  • Lori
    Edited and reposted, thank you! On to the next one. Lori
    Message 1 of 2 , Nov 18, 2011
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      Edited and reposted, thank you! On to the next one.

      Lori

      On Nov 14, 2011, at 3:31 PM, richardglyon wrote:

      >
      > Lori,
      >
      > Excellent Review; only a few edits, in the standard format. After
      > revising upload to http://tinyurl.com/ngor6r
      >
      > Cheers, Richard
      >
      > <<Size: Medium
      > Dimensions: 66 in (168 cm) long>>
      > EDIT: Listed or measured? Please indicate, and if listed, add
      > measured ones.
      >
      > <<The thickness gives it a notable drop if part of the body happens
      > to stray from the narrow mattress to the ground.>>
      > Edit: The user not the thickness gets the drop – "gives me a notable"
      >
      > <<Locations: >>
      > Comment: Wow – sounds like a California hiking guide. I'm jealous.
      >
      > <<and no less noise than other air mattresses or self inflating
      > pads I have had.>>
      > Edit: self-inflating [with a hyphen]
      >
      > <<Most of the rolled mattress will fit in a quart size storage bag. >>
      > Edit: quart-size [with a hyphen]
      >
      > <<When using it in the hammock I inflate the NeoAir to about half
      > full, and do not notice a dropoff in performance even then.>>
      > Edit: drop off [two words]
      >
      > <<The usual temperature range at night for my outings tends to be 30 -
      > 40 F (-1 - 4 C) when in the mountains, >>
      > EDIT: Use of the minus sign and dash is confusing – "(-1 to 4 C)"
      >
      > <<* still only 20" (51 cm) wide unless you get the largest size>>
      > Edit: This is more style than substance, but your comments tell me
      > that your dislike is that you need to get the longer pad to
      > increase width. I'd say "longer size."
      >
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