Re: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval: OR: Clif Shot Bloks- Nancy Griffith
- Hi Ray,
Thanks for the edits (also on the Sugoi Beanie). Yeah, we actually do need to meet more often like this. It would mean that I'm catching up on my ORs!
I've made the changes, uploaded and deleted the test files.
See you again.
From: Ray <rayestrella@...>
Sent: Monday, October 24, 2011 5:32 PM
Subject: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval: OR: Clif Shot Bloks- Nancy Griffith
We have to stop meeting this way Nancy. Oh yeah, I'm an editor huh? OK, we can keep it up.
Another nice review. Once the edit is made it can go to:
Reviews > Food > Energy Bars and Drinks > Clif Shot Bloks
*** I decided to try Clif's Shot Bloks. <snip>. Clif's Shot Bloks give me a similar sensation
Edit: really there should not be an apostrophe as the proper name is Clif Shot Bloks. Maybe use "the Clif Shot Bloks" instead. (Up to you)
*** My all-time favorite was Margarita.
Comment: mine too
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