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APPROVED: EDIT: OR - Caldera Fissure - Ray Estrella

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  • Michael
    Ahhh shoot - I forgot to put APPROVED in the header - sorry, Mike
    Message 1 of 10 , Aug 22, 2011
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      Ahhh shoot - I forgot to put APPROVED in the header - sorry,

      Mike

      --- In BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com, "Michael" <mlebwill@...> wrote:
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      > Ray,
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      > Great in-depth OR with excellent pictures. A couple of minor edits and then you can load away, however I will ask that you create your own folder since I haven't been granted that ability yet.
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      > Mike
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      > General Comment: It might be a good idea to identify in the product details that this is a custom product not listed on the website and to contact Trail Designs directly to purchase.
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      >
      > >> Tester Bio
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      > Comment / Edit: I can't believe that I'll be the one to call out the most active tester on the site, but your bio has 100+ words in it. I counted it myself (4 times to make sure) and the word count function in Word shows it also.
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      > >> MSRP: Depends on cook set
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      > EDIT: Could you identify that it is a special order. Something like "MSRP: Special Order - Depends on cook set"
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      >
      > >> It is supported by the lip of the Cone itself, just like is the case with my original Ti-Tri (see review).
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      > EDIT: I think you have an extra "is" or a missing "it" in the sentence.
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      >
      > >> Note small alcohol bottle in the bear canister that I was all I needed for the trip.
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      > EDIT: I think you have an extra "I" in the sentence.
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      > >> I do like the idea that if something were to cause me to spend more time afield than planned I can always fall back on wood as a secondary fuel source.
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      > EDIT: Change afield to "in the field"
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    • Ray
      ... Ha! It must have grown over the years. Much like my waist... Thanks for the edits. All made and uploaded. See you on the next one. Ray
      Message 2 of 10 , Aug 23, 2011
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        --- In BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com, "Michael" <mlebwill@...> wrote:

        > Comment / Edit: I can't believe that I'll be the one to call out the most active tester on the site, but your bio has 100+ words in it.

        Ha! It must have grown over the years. Much like my waist...

        Thanks for the edits. All made and uploaded.

        See you on the next one.

        Ray
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