Re: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval - ASICS Thermopolis XLT - Kristine Mar
- Hi Richard,
Thank you for your edits. The changes have been made and the report has been uploaded.
From: richardglyon <montana.angler@...>
Sent: Sunday, April 10, 2011 3:31 PM
Subject: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval - ASICS Thermopolis XLT - Kristine Mar
Good job. Just a few edits, in the standard format. After revising you are cleared to upload at http://tinyurl.com/3ugxlq2
<< Asics Thermopolis XLT Headband (2010)>> [Title]
EDIT: ASICS [all caps, as this is how the manufacturer spells it]
<<Manufacturer: Asics America>>
EDIT: Here you should use the manufacturer's full legal name – ASICS [all caps] Corporation.
<<Year of Manufacture: 2010>>
Edit: Did you buy this in 2010? If so I'd add a line to that effect, as you comment on durability in the text of your report. A reader will be interested in how long you've used it.
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