Edit/Approval - Big Agnes Insulated Air Core - Nancy Griffith
Thanks for another very useful Owner Review. A few edits, in the standard format; after revising you're cleared to upload.
Don't forget to delete your Tests folder copy.
<< Manufacturer: Big Agnes>>
EDIT: This should be its full legal name: Big Agnes, Inc.
<<Available in multiple sizes listed below with weights and price:>>
Comment: While it's fine to include all available sizes, as you have done, you could also summarize (e g, "Available in seven other sizes; MSRP varies slightly.") The detailed information is available on the website. No need to change, however.
<<We purchased two of these pads for use with our Big Agnes double-wide sleeping bag.>>
Edit/Comment: You might remind the reader that your review of the double bag is available on BGT. As it's also made by Big Agnes, you may name it. Your call.
<<The pads definitely provide more insulation than the pad without it.>>
Edit: The word "pad" is used here for both the pad you are reviewing and as a general descriptor. It would be clearer to say "The Insulated Air Core [singular] definitely provides more insulation than the standard Air Core pad."
Comment: Aren't insulated pads great!
<<The pad is easy to inflate even at high elevation after a long day of backpacking although I have to admit that my husband does most of the work.>>
Edit: It might help to note that this pad inflates the same as an uninsulated one, as many insulated pads (including both of mine) require special inflation techniques. Up to you.
- Hi Richard,
Thanks for the edits. I made the changes that you recommended, uploaded to the
folder and deleted the test file.
See you again.
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