REPOST- Ibex Woolies Crew Stripe - Mike Pearl
Sorry I didn't realize how carried away I was with the Bio. I think I am just under the limit now! I have made the three corrections as well. Here's the shortened Bio.
My backpacking experience began six years ago, after years of car camping. Most trips are for two or three days, some lasting a week. I hike with a group of two to four, with plans for a multi-day solo hike next summer. I pack a tent or tarp depending on availability of trail shelters. My average mileage is 15 mi (24 km). While aware of weight, it is not my primary concern. I strive for enjoyable outings with functional, reliable gear. I usually travel in woodland mountain terrain. I am a three season camper, but enjoy hiking all year.
--- In BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com, "richardglyon" <montana.angler@...> wrote:
> Great job of revising. Only a few more edits, of which only one requires a re-write. As I mentioned in my earlier edit, BGT has a 100-word limit on personal biography, and your revised bio has 136 words too long. Could you revise accordingly, and repost to the list only the plain text of your bio (with REPOST, the product name, and your name in the subject line). No need to repost the full text or do a new html version. After I approve the revised bio I'll create a folder for you to upload.
> Four minor edits, in the same format as before:
> <<Guarantee/ Warranty: Ibex offers lifetime warranty against manufacturing and material defects.>>
> Edit: materials defects ["material defect" in legal terminology has an entirely different meaning; worth clarifying for the nitpickers and lawyers like me]
> <<If I start to overheated removing my outermost layer helps to regulate body temperature.>>
> EDIT: to overheat
> Normally it's a baselayer and light fleece at such temp's.>>
> EDIT: temps [no apostrophe]
> <<The Woolies is a well made quality shirt.>>
> Edit: well-made [with a hyphen]
> Cheers, Richard