EDIT: OR - Osprey Map Wrap Map Case
- Hi Shane,
Looking better. Here are some more edits, and I will need to see it again. So repost here and put up a new HTML please. (And please put your name in the subject line too.)
I am going to be gone for a week starting next Tuesday so get it in before that if you don't want to wait.
EDIT: this needs to be clickable in your HTML
***Temp: 10 - 35 F (-12.21 to 1.67 C)
EDIT: please round off the Celsius numbers as the Fahrenheit numbers are.
***12th, 2010 Temp: Temp: 36 - 50 F (2.22 to 10.00 C)
EDIT: same thing, and delete one "Temp:"
*** The Wrap Strap made of durable nylon webbing
EDIT: The Wrap Strap "is" made of durable nylon webbing
***and is 3/4 in (0.02 m) wide and 12 in (0.30 m) in length.
EDIT: metric conversions for inches should be cm, not meters. Use meter for foot conversions
*** The reverse side of the label is has the corresponding Velcro patch
EDIT: delete "is"
*** When the case is in its tri-fold formation, this strap warps around the entire case,
EDIT: this strap "wraps" around the entire case
*** I also take a 3mm utility cord
EDIT: 3 mm
*** The tri-fold design lends it's self nicely to packability.
EDIT: lends "itself"