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Edit/Approval - Black Diamond Orbit Lantern - Brandon Spring

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  • richardglyon
    Brandon, Thanks for the quick turnaround. Just a few minor edits, in the same format as before: EDIT is a required change, Edit a suggested change. After
    Message 1 of 1 , Jun 8, 2010
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      Brandon, Thanks for the quick turnaround. Just a few minor edits, in the same format as before: EDIT is a required change, Edit a suggested change. After revising you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/26z8hrm

      Be sure to check the Owner Review option when you upload, and also to delete your Tests/OR copy.

      When you post your second OR, kindly follow the directions I requested in my first edit: include in your post a tinyurl or snipurl link to the Tests/OR folder copy. See message #79261 for an example.

      Congratulations on completing your first Owner Review!

      Cheers, Richard

      <<The base of the Lantern is not very large at only 1.7 in (4.32 cm) making it unstable on uneven surfaces and the battery compartment is not sealed to be water tight.>>
      EDIT: 1.7 in (4.32 cm) in diameter [Might be radius or circumference]
      Edit: I'd round 4.32 cm to 4.3 cm
      Edit: "watertight" is usually one word

      This little Lantern works good on picnic tables, hanging inside the tent or igloo and on the ground next to the stove.
      EDIT: works well on picnic tables

      <<- Collapsible body and 2 piece fold-able hanging loop result in very compact design>>
      Edit: 2-piece [with a hyphen. "two-piece" would be even better]
      EDIT: foldable [one word, no hyphen]
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