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EDIT/Approval - KEEN VOYAGEUR MID Hiking Boot - Paul Schilke

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  • richardglyon
    Paul, Well done. Only a few minor edits for you, in the same format as before. When you ve revised you may upload at http://tinyurl.com/yd9tj2n Cheers, Richard
    Message 1 of 1 , Sep 30, 2009
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      Paul,
      Well done. Only a few minor edits for you, in the same format as before. When you've revised you may upload at http://tinyurl.com/yd9tj2n

      Cheers, Richard

      <KEEN's Website lists the shoes techenical features as follows:>
      EDIT: technical [spelling]

      <The Voyageur Mid hiking boot is acceptable for most trail hiking, pavement pounding and low intensity bike riding.>
      Edit: low-intensity [with a hyphen]

      < The shoelaces provided by the manufacturer are too long.>
      Edit: Consider adding "Also," at the beginning of this sentence, as you are changing the subject from the preceding sentence.

      <Easy to tie, take-off and put back on>
      EDIT: take off [Delete the hyphen.]
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