Re: [BackpackGearTest] EDIT: Revised OR - Book Norman Clyde - David Wilkes
- I really appreciate your help on this one. I think I found the book version of doing a trip report rather than a gear report.
Edits made and file uploaded.
From: Andrew Buskov <rescue@...>
Sent: Thursday, September 3, 2009 3:07:37 PM
Subject: [BackpackGearTest] EDIT: Revised OR - Book Norman Clyde - David Wilkes
Here are you edits. As usual;
EDIT: Change Me
Edit: Think about changing me
Comment: Everything else
This report is SO MUCH BETTER! I'm very happy with this one and am so glad
that you saw what I was talking about. This is the type of report that I was
wanting. After reading your 5-fingers report, I didn't exactly know what
happened with this one. It's difficult writing about a book as opposed to a
piece of gear, but you made it happen and was still able to keep a bit of
storyline in there.
Change these edits and upload to this folder: http://tinyurl. com/l6639e
> Mountaineer of California's Sierra NevadaEIDT: Extra space after "of". Please remove.
> July 27 2008EDIT: Lets go ahead and change the date. It's quite a bit away from July
>Comment: Something to think about... We allow a naming convention instead of
> E-Mail: amatbrewer@yahoo. net
an email if you want. It helps keep down the spam, especially when you get
as many reviews as some. amatbrewer (AT) yahoo (dot) net
> Publisher:EDIT: I would assume that Robert would be the author... right?
> Robert C. Pavlik
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