EDIT/APPROVAL: OR - Gossamer Gear Lightrek Poles - Nancy Griffith
- Hi Nancy,
Here are your edits for the Gossamer Gear Lightrek Poles. Mostly small
things; I think you can handle them on your own, though I'm glad to take
a gander at the final version if you'd like.
They follow the usual conventions for BGT edits:
EDIT: You must change this.
Edit: You should change this, or explain why not.
Comment: Just something to think about.
When you've made the edits, please upload your report to
and then delete your HTML from the test folder.
Thanks for your hard work!
> Note: Mine are an older version that were slightly heavier. TheyComment: I had to read the second sentence a few times before I got it.
> measured what
> was advertised for them.
If the poles measure what was advertised for them, why not just put 3.2
oz as their listed weight? You might add that later versions are
advertised as being lighter.
> Length Tested: 120 cmEDIT: Since Gossamer Gear does list length conversions, we need them
> Sizes Available: From 105 to 135 cm (in 5 cm increments)
> [snipped multiple empty lines]Edit: there are many extra spaces before the beginning of your Field Use
section. Is it possible to remove some of them?
> I purchased my poles in August 2007 and have used them for approximatelyEDIT: Please add a conversion for 135 miles.
> miles of backpacking on 6 different trips for a total of 20 days. I also
> usedEDIT: Please add a conversion for 5 miles.
> them for approximately 10 day hikes averaging 5 miles. I chose the
> for me was that they advertised that I could get a replacement pole forEdit: You abbreviate United States dollars as "USD" here, but "US" up in
> $30 USD
your product information section. Could you choose one abbreviation and
use it on both prices?
> [trip report section snipped]EDIT: Please spell out "National Park" and "California" instead of "NP"
and "CA" for the benefit of our international readers.
> trailhead in my car. I haven't transported them via airline only becauseEdit: I might remove 'only' for clarity. Your call.
> afraid to lose them.
Nice review, Nancy! I'll catch you on the next one.
- Hi Hollis,
Thanks for the edits. Sorry for some of them being so silly. I started this review a long time ago and found that it had little things in it that I have since learned to correct. It seems that I posted it without noticing all of them.
I have made the corrections, uploaded and deleted the test file.
Congrats on your new 'Documentation Moderator' role!