Edit: Caffeinated Shot Bloks - Ray Estrella
- Edit: Caffeinated Shot Bloks - Ray Estrella
Blimey, the stuff you eat! I've never seen them.
A few edits for you and you are OK. Fix them and upload to:
> when I finished dinner at 6:00. The temp had dropped to 17 F (-8 C)Comment: you might want to put PM after 6:00 and 11:00, just to be tidy.
> by 9:30 PM, the last time I checked as it started snowing again at
> 11:00 and I did not want to go out to where I had the thermometer
> 2950 ft (899 m) of gain and loss.Edit: round off the metric maybe, and elsewhere.
> I stayed at 4000 ft (1219 m)
> Temps ranged from 40 to 72 F with elevations from 3600 ft > to almost 6000EDIT: metric
> pack to start off with on the trail, but I am getting tired of typing.Edit: With respect, I think you could delete the last clause?
> I would like to say that in my pursuit of healthy living, I have learnedEDIT: delete comma - definitely.
> it does not come across negitivly to my taste buds.EDIT: negatively
> The tubes have a printed "cut here" at one end. While there is not a notchComment: I have had good success tearing from the serrated end, using one of
the serrations as a notch. Try it?
> I keep the tube in my pocket where it length makes it easy toEDIT: its length
> because I do not get the headache that I normally do when deprivedComment: Blimey. I am not that bad myself. I can go without for the day.
> All in all I like the caffeine added Bloks.Edit: caffeine-added (or caffeine-boosted)
- Hello Roger,
Thank you as always for the edits and suggestions. All taken and made. I shall post as soon as the Uploads Allowed button is pushed at your end ;-)
One thing that may want to be looked at is the fact that a lot of Shot Blok reports and reviews are under the heading Clif Bar. As the "Clif Bar" is a grain-type bar and very different from the Shot Bloks it may be a good idea to give the Bloks their own folder like you gave me. (Actually mine could go in with all the other flavors too, unless they want a seperate folder for each flavor.)
Just a thought.
- Hi Ray
> I shall post as soon as the Uploads Allowed button is pushed at your endOh bother! Done.
> One thing that may want to be looked at is the fact that a lot of ShotWhich is why I created one for you.
> Blok reports and reviews
> are under the heading Clif Bar. As the "Clif Bar" is a grain-type bar and
> very different from the
> Shot Bloks it may be a good idea to give the Bloks their own folder like
> you gave me.
I will defer to the Powers that be re the moving of the other reports.
Cheers and Happy Munching...