Edit: OR Titan Kettle-Alex-9.22.08
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> Mountain Safety Research, Inc. (MSR)EDIT: This link is still not clickable in the HTML version.
> Product: MSR Titan KettleEDIT: Current MSRP for this product is $49.95. Please change to reflect
> Year of manufacture: 2005
> MSRP: $39.99 (USD)
current pricing. This price is wrong.
> Material: TitaniumEDIT: Listed weight now is actually 4.2 oz (118 g). As this is in the Fast &
> Capacity listed .85L (28.7 oz)
> Capacity measured: .85 L (28.7 oz)
> Weight listed 4 oz (113 g)
> Weight actual: 4 oz (113 g)
Light series, please change and list actual weight 1 place past decimal for
those gram weenies out there.
> weight and adaptability are desired. Although not a member of theEDIT: Hard to tell if you're talking about the pot, or yourself. How about
> ultra-light adventure race crowd, simplicity and flexibility are
> always appreciated.
"Although I'm not a member..."
> Although I own another titanium pot this kettle accompanies me to manyEDIT: Additional field information would be very helpful. How many times
> trips in the Presidential Mountains above 4,000' (1,220 m), Acadia
> National Park and day trips on Mount Monadnock, with temperatures from
> 85° F (29° C) to -5° F (-21° C).
have you used this pot?
> to measure the proper amount of water) and a hot beverage, or a bagEDIT: Is the "(spice with beef jerky, dried tomatoes bacon bits or
> and boil packet of rice. (spiced with beef jerky, dried tomatoes bacon
> bits or bouillon) I almost exclusively boil water for meals.
bouillon)" section supposed to be talking about the rice? If so, include it
before the period. In addition, this appears to be one long sentence that is
a somewhat difficult to read. Please split this up and rephrase it a bit.
> self-explanatory. Three hot meals and beverages with little or noEDIT: "CLENING" does not need to be all caps
> CLEANING required does it get any better.
> cooked pasta and rice without bags and added different sauces, veggiesEDIT: Reads weird, let's try "added different sauces, veggies, other
> and other ingredients simmered without permanently bonding food to the
ingredients, and simmered without..."
> bottom of the kettle. These are the results of several years ofEDIT: Your HTML shows "approximately100 plus". Please add space before 100.
> moderate usage (approximately 100 plus meals prepared) and are not