EDIT: REPOST Owner Review - Benchmade Mini Griptilian 556
- Hi Sam,
This OR looks good. I have more edits following the same EDIT (must do), Edit (should do)
and Comment (just that) convention you've already seen. Once you have made these edits,
please upload your OR to the test folder again and REPOST here to the list.
I noticed that you already uploaded your review to the BGT website. I deleted the file. In
the future, please do not upload to the website (except the test folder) until the review has
been given approval.
BGT OR Editor
> 6000-12,000 ft (1800 m -3658 m) and on the Northern California Coast.Edit: make the dash spacing consistent
> pack weighs between 40-50 pounds (18-22kg).Edit: use lb for pounds
EDIT: put a space before kg
> Manufacturer's Website: <<www.benchmade.com>>EDIT: This needs to be a clickable link in your HTML. Please make sure this is working
when you upload your report. It isn't now.
> in many different colors and two blade configurations; plain edge and partially serratedEDIT: colon not semi-colon
> of blade is a modified drop point, a blade with convex curve in the tip of the knife,EDIT: cut the extra space before "a blade with convex"
> providing enough belly for slicing and spreading of mustard, jelly, etc.Edit: cut the extra "of" (or say "the slicing and spreading of")
> These are small metal "buttons" ,EDIT: cut the extra space before the comma
> attached to the blade where a thumb naturally rest,EDIT: where my thumb naturally rests
> which create a positive pushing location for a thumbEDIT: creates
EDIT: I don't know what you mean by "positive pushing location". Ideal?
EDIT: for my thumb
> A person can easily open the knife with one handEDIT: Instead say, "I can easily...".
> AXIS mechanism which locksEDIT: cut the extra space before locks
> handle near where a thumb and forefingerEDIT: where my thumb...
> Close the blade by using either a thumb,EDIT: I close the blade...
>The clip is made out of metal and very strong.EDIT: ...and is very strong.
> Benchmade has made it clear with thier packagingEDIT: their
> Inside the sturdy box I found the knifeEDIT: cut the extra space after box
> I carried this knife daily for about the last six monthsEDIT: cut the extra space after daily -- please do a search and replace for these double
spaces, they're showing up all over the place
> preparing tender for the fireEDIT: tinder not tender
> around a campsite. the bright yellow handle has savedEDIT: The bright...
> the AXIS lock shows not sign of wearEDIT: no sign
> The finish on the blade is a satin finish from the factory,. Very shiny and smooth.EDIT: There's an extra comma before the period
EDIT: Make this one sentence, perhaps something like, "The satin finish on the blade is
very shiny and smooth."
> Weather it is fish, paper, cotton or food,EDIT: Whether
> more effort and as a result I spend more timeEDIT: cut the extra space after effort