Edit/Approval REI Mini Candle Lantern - Dawn Larsen
- Edit/Approval REI Mini Candle Lantern - Dawn Larsen
OK, mostly fixed up.
One comment: this is short. I think it is OK for a candle lantern, but
for a more complex bit of gear it would need more detail.
Three small edits required, but I think I should be able to leave
these to you to sort out? When you have done all three so you are
clear to upload to:
> Weight: 165 (74 kg)EDIT: 165 lb
> (90 degrees F), it takes about 10 minutes for it to cool down.EDIT: we don't normally use 'degrees' as they are not required. But
you do need to include the Centigrade equivalent here. You should have:
(90 F or ?? C)
> lasik surgery and don't' see well in low light, so I could not read byEDIT: delete apostrophe after don't