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Re: [BackpackGearTest] EDIT/Approval: Dri Ducks - Honora Renwick

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  • Honora Renwick
    Hi Roger Thanks for the edit. I will make the changes you advise. Sorry about the delay. I see you are a neighbour from across the ditch... cheers, Honora
    Message 1 of 3 , Apr 2, 2008
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      Hi Roger

      Thanks for the edit. I will make the changes you advise. Sorry about the delay. I see you are a neighbour from across the ditch...

      cheers, Honora

      rcaffin <r.caffin@...> wrote:
      EDIT/Approval: Dri Ducks - Honora Renwick

      Hi Honora

      Very good! In fact, this requires only two edits, which is rare for a
      first effort.

      The first is to fix the date in the byline to ??-March-2008

      The other is the following in the text:
      (Large chest: 46" - 48" (117 cm - 122 cm)
      waist: 38" - 42" (97 cm - 107 cm) sleeve: 37 1/2" (95 cm) inseam:
      33" (84 cm) height: 5'6" - 6'3" (1.68 m - 1.91 m) weight:150 - 190
      lb (68 kg - 86 kg))

      This is very hard to read, and it would be much better turned into a
      table-style listing and

      placed in the Product Details section thus:
      "Manufacturer specifications for Large Size
      Chest: 46" - 48" (117 cm - 122 cm)
      Waist: 38" - 42" (97 cm - 107 cm)
      Sleeve: 37 1/2" (95 cm)
      Inseam: 33" (84 cm)
      Height: 5'6" - 6'3" (1.68 m - 1.91 m)
      Weight: 150 - 190 lb (68 kg - 86 kg))"

      When you have done this you are clear to upload to:
      http://www.backpackgeartest.org/reviews/Rain%20Gear/Jackets%20and%20Pants/Frogg%20Toggs%20Dri%20

      Ducks/

      Congratulations
      Roger Caffin
      BGT Editor






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