Edit: EMS THUNDERHEAD RAIN JACKET - EVAN COOK
- Edit: EMS THUNDERHEAD RAIN JACKET - EVAN COOK
Yes, this is coming on very well. I have a couple of small edits for you to
do. When you have fixed these, could you put the new version into the
Test/OR folder please and just post a link to it here. Don't bother
reposting the plain text.
> PhotoYou neeed to acknowledge somehow that the image is from the vendor web site.
Copyright matter you see.
It would be nice if the image was a little larger - is this possible? Maybe
the web site has a larger image?
> My arm length in 28 inches(72cm) and the sleeve length ofEDIT: spaces missing between imperial and metric.
> the jacket is 34inches(86cm)
> I was one this mountain for a dayEDIT on the mountain
> elevation ranged from 9,375 feet(2856m) to 12,162 feet(3,707 m).EDIT: spaces again.
> UtahEdit: I got very confused here for a bit. If you are describing three
> Moab, Utah: I camped in and around Moab,
different areas (yes?) then a blank line between each one would make it a
whole lot easier to understand.