Re: Edit/Approval: OWNER REVIEW - Coleman Pack-Away Lantern R Lyon
- Ray, Revised and uploaded. I also fixed some spacing problems. A
couple of comments below. Regards, Richard
--- In BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com, "rayestrella1"
> Hi Richard,
> Comment: I noticed that you capitalized Lantern throughout. I do
> really know that that is proper as it is not the name withoutColeman
> or Pack-Away in front of it. At least you are consistent with it.I
> won't make an edit out of it but a higher pay-grade may saysomething
> later.--- I do this often, as you do after a (hereinafter the Lantern) in
your reports. I do parenthetical defined terms all day long in my
work and I don't think it's needed for clarity, but of course I'll
abide the higher-ups.
> Edit: I think you mean; "I'd place the Lantern on my open book,
> placing it on the page that I wasn't reading to keep the book
> The way it is now reads funny, like you have another book thereyou
> are not reading.batteries,
> --------- Much better, thanks.
> ***After this happened a couple of times I re-seated the
> which seemed to solve the problem for that evening. But notPerhaps
> permanently, as the same thing happened the following night.
> something's slightly out of place inside.threaded
> Comment: I have had that happen too. I took a cork screw and
> it onto the little spring that contacts the negative end of the--------I'll try it.
> batteries and pulled it slightly out a bit.