EDIT: OWNER REVIEW - MPACK AQUAFLO - Hugh T
- Hello Hugh
Thank you for your Owner Review, and for putting the HTML in the test
folder. That shows a lot of confidence. (I like that.) You have done
a very good job. Your initial edits will follow. They will take the
EDIT: must be changed
Edit: should be changed but will be left to your discretion
Comment: just that or something to think about
When you have made the changes please repost here with REPOST added
to the subject line. Include your name also please. You can put an
updated version in the test folder too.
Welcome to BGT,
***There are no measurement markings on the reservoir which does not
retain it's shape well enough to make such markings useful.
EDIT: which does not retain "its" shape
***The seal around the reservoir begins right at the edge of the
reservoir and is .3 in (.7 cm) wide on 4 sides. The seal at the spout
is .4 in (1 cm) wide and the bonding to the spout is also .4 in (1
EDIT: we are asked to use 0 before the decimal; 0.3 in (0.7 cm) wide
on 4 sides. The seal at the spout is 0.4 in (1 cm) wide.
***The Cap is black plastic and the reservoir connector fitting is
EDIT: The "cap" (no capital c)
***The Cleaning instructions are also clear and detailed.
EDIT: cleaning should not be capitalized either
***Temperatures ranged from 82 F (27.78 C) to 29 F (-1.6 C).
EDIT: the Celsius temps should be rounded to the whole number please
***The reservoir can be carried and used in any orientation but
putting it spout down ensures you can suck out all the water.
EDIT: the dreaded "you" strikes We need to keep the review in the
first person to avoid projection. Just change to "I"