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Re: [BackpackGearTest] EDIT - Gregory Jade 50 - Stephanie

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  • jetriple@rockwellcollins.com
    Wrong list Leesa... Jet ... and ... [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
    Message 1 of 3 , Jun 5, 2007
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      Wrong list Leesa...

      Jet

      BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com wrote on 06/05/2007 07:56:30 AM:

      > Stephanie,
      >
      > Looks good - just two edits.
      >
      > Leesa
      >
      > Test Report: Gregory Jade 50
      >
      > Name: Stephanie Martin
      >
      > EDIT: double 'the'
      > Product Features and Construction:
      > The Jade 50 is modern, feature-rich version of *the the Gregory G pack,
      and
      > has been made specifically for women. Its design incorporates comfort,
      > multiple access points and plenty of pockets for organization. With a
      > maximum recommended load of 35 pounds (16 kg), this pack is targeted for
      > weekend excursions.
      >
      >
      >
      > EDIT: double 'is'
      > Overall, I am impressed with the design of this pack, though I do
      > I don't know if this *is is a product of the fabric or the
      > type of cord or a combination thereof.
      >
      >
      > [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
      >
      >
      >
      > To read our reviews, please visit http://www.backpackgeartest.org/
      > Yahoo! Groups Links
      >
      >
      >


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    • Leesa J
      Thanks for catching that! Leesa On 6/5/07, jetriple@rockwellcollins.com ... [Non-text portions of this message have been
      Message 2 of 3 , Jun 5, 2007
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        Thanks for catching that!

        Leesa

        On 6/5/07, jetriple@... <jetriple@...>
        wrote:
        >
        > Wrong list Leesa...
        >
        > Jet
        >
        > BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com <BackpackGearTest%40yahoogroups.com>wrote on 06/05/2007 07:56:30 AM:
        >
        >
        > > Stephanie,
        > >
        > > Looks good - just two edits.
        > >
        > > Leesa
        > >
        > > Test Report: Gregory Jade 50
        > >
        > > Name: Stephanie Martin
        > >
        > > EDIT: double 'the'
        > > Product Features and Construction:
        > > The Jade 50 is modern, feature-rich version of *the the Gregory G pack,
        > and
        > > has been made specifically for women. Its design incorporates comfort,
        > > multiple access points and plenty of pockets for organization. With a
        > > maximum recommended load of 35 pounds (16 kg), this pack is targeted for
        > > weekend excursions.
        > >
        > >
        > >
        > > EDIT: double 'is'
        > > Overall, I am impressed with the design of this pack, though I do
        > > I don't know if this *is is a product of the fabric or the
        > > type of cord or a combination thereof.
        > >
        > >
        > > [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
        > >
        > >
        > >
        > > To read our reviews, please visit http://www.backpackgeartest.org/
        > > Yahoo! Groups Links
        > >
        > >
        > >
        >
        > [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
        >
        >
        >


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