ADDENDA: EDIT: OR - Mountain Designs Lexan Flask
I noted three more small issues. I could catch them next round, but
prefer to deal with them now.
> This flask is constructed from blue transparent lexan, a### EDIT: watertight [not water tight]. Lexan is a proprietary name,
> polycarbonate plastic. As well as being water tight, this flask is
> incredibly strong and also has limited thermo properties.
so the initial L needs to be capitalized. Finally, thermo isn't a
word, just a prefix (as noted elsewhere in the initial edit). This
should read "limited thermal properties" presumably, but you should
explain precisely what you mean by this.