- Mike, Ray s edit is absolutely correct. It is not a noun but a pronoun, and its, sans apostrophe, is the correct modern possessive/genitive form of thatMessage 1 of 10 , Sep 2, 2006View SourceMike,
Ray's edit is absolutely correct. "It" is not a noun but a pronoun,
and "its," sans apostrophe, is the correct modern possessive/genitive
form of that pronoun. When I say *modern*, I should stress that "its"
has been the accepted form in this context since well before 1800.
BGT OR Editor
--- In BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com, Mike <hiking@...> wrote:
> My reposted review is below, and will be on the website soon. I do
> have a point of disagreement with you:
> On Aug 31, 2006, at 6:43 PM, rayestrella1 wrote:
> > ***my local outfitter had it's usual sale,
> > EDIT: its
> > ***I spotted the CamelBak StoAway with the other hydration packs and
> > read it's hang tag.
> > EDIT: its
> This is the possessive form of "it" and required an apostrophe, not a
> plural form:
> "Possessive nouns usually indicate ownership, as in Tim's hat or the
> lawyer's desk." from my college writer.
> CamelBak StoAway Hydration Pack - Owner Review
> by Mike Lipay - August 29, 2006
> Personal Information
> Name Mike Lipay
> Age 51
> Gender Male
> Height 5 ft 8 in (1.73 m)
> Weight 180 lb (81.65 kg)
> Email hiking AT westernpa DOT us
> City, State Plum Boro, Pennsylvania
> I've been hiking and backpacking since the '60s. I enjoy hiking solo,
> with my kids, or with local hiking groups. I have taught LNT skills,
> wilderness survival, and outdoor first-aid. I am no ultra-light
> backpacker (my pack typically weighs 29-40 lb (13-18 kg) loaded),
> although I am always looking for ways to cut down on the weight. I'm
> a low-techie, preferring a hiking staff to trekking poles, compass to
> GPS, fire to fuel; but I am open to new products when there is a
> distinct advantage over more traditional "technology".
> Product Information
> Manufacturer CamelBak
> Website http://www.CamelBak.com
> MSRP $35 USD
> Year Manufactured 2005
> Purchased August 2005
> (From Mfg website) Fits CamelBak-compatible packs perfectly! Our
> StoAway slips easily into the hydration pocket of your backcountry
> pack, or use the convenient D-Rings to strap it anywhere. And,
> external access to the OMEGA fillport makes the StoAway a breeze to
> fill, keeping you out enjoying the snow longer.
> Durable exterior is abrasion-resistant and lightweight
> Includes carry tether for easy loading and transport
> Insulated Tube and Bite Valve covers help keep water from freezing
> External access to the OMEGA Reservoir makes filling fast and easy
> Free from defects in material and workmanship for a period of two
> years from the date of purchase. The warranty is limited to the
> original purchaser of the product and is not transferrable. During
> the two year warranty period, CamelBak will repair or replace, at its
> option, only the defective part of the pack, reservoir, Bite Valve or
> outer pack at no additional charge.
> Capacity: 72 oz (2 L) - NOTE: 72 oz coverts to 2.1 L; 2 L is 68 oz.
> No other measurements are listed in the product information or the
> Capacity: 61 oz (1.8 L) Capacity was determined by starting off with
> a measured 68 oz (2 L), holding the StowAway vertically, then pouring
> the water in until it reached the bottom of the opening. I then
> measured the remaining liquid, which came out to 7 oz (200 ml).
> Length: 18 in (46 cm)
> Width: 8 in (20cm)
> Opening: 3.5 in (9 cm)
> Bladders, or hydration packs, are not uncommon these days: light-
> weight, collapsible, food-grade plastic containers whose primary
> purpose is to carry drinking water. These light-weight wonders have
> all but replaced the age-old canteens. However, unlike the canteens
> they replace, bladders (and their contents) suffer from exposure to
> the elements -- heat in the summer and freezing cold in the winter.
> In the past I have stuffed them inside my backpack, hoping that the
> contents of the pack would keep the water inside the bladder from
> freezing (or getting hot). This worked fine for the most part, but
> offered no real solution for day hikes, or side trips from a base
> camp, when I wasn't carrying my pack.
> At the start of the winter hiking season (so far as gear buying is
> concerned), my local outfitter had its usual sale, and I was there
> checking out the new stuff. I spotted the CamelBak StoAway with the
> other hydration packs and read it's hang tag. The idea of a hydration
> pack that would keep my water from freezing quickly caught my
> attention and, even though the sale cost was a bit more that I would
> normally pay for a bladder, I quickly bought it, feeling that if it
> kept my water from freezing it would be worth the price.
> While it was still warm (September), and I had no concerns about my
> water freezing, I couldn't wait to give the StoAway a try. Utilizing
> the D-Rings, and a quick-strap, I fashioned a method to carry it
> without a backpack. The StoAway hung well against my back, not
> sliding or shifting while I walked. For the next 3 months I hiked
> with it every chance I got so as to get use to using the StoAway. I
> quickly discovered that I liked the bite valve cover as it kept the
> valve from picking up dirt when I stopped for lunch breaks (resting
> it against a tree or bolder).
> One problem did appear during this use: filling the wide-mouth
> bottle, while easy at home, was not that easy in the field. You can't
> lay the bottle down to fill it up because the back of the pack will
> come to rest against the mouth of the bottle. The StoAway has to be
> held vertically while filling, a neat trick while using a purifier
> pump (Oh, for an intelligent octopus). Even my SteriPEN was difficult
> to use, trying to hold the pen in the bottle, push the activator
> button, and swish the water around without it splashing out. This is
> definitely a bottle made more for chemical purification than
> mechanical, although mechanical is not impossible.
> Winter came in December and while there wasn't much snow this winter
> there were plenty of days when the temps dipped below the freezing
> point, mostly on weekends (of course). The StoAway worked just as
> promised, regardless of the temperatures the water in my StoAway
> never froze. At night, just to be safe, I would drain the tube back
> into the bottle so that I would not have to contend with a frozen
> tube in the morning. I kept the StoAway itself in the bottom of my
> sleeping bag or, on milder nights, just inside the
> When the summer came, rather than storing it until next season, I
> figured I would see how well the StoAway kept drinks cool. Now, this
> isn't the advertised usage for the pack, but what guy ever stays
> within published guidelines? The wide mouth on the StoAway was
> perfect for loading ice cubes. I would load as much ice into the pack
> as I could fit, then fill it the rest of the way with cold water.
> Even though the temperatures reached into the upper 80's F (29+ C)
> the water stayed cool for a good 8 hours. After working with it for a
> while what I eventually did was to half-fill the StoAway with water
> then put it into the freezer overnight, next morning I would fill it
> the rest of the way with refrigerated water. This worked out just as
> well, and was easier than working with ice cube trays.
> - Keeps water from freezing
> - Bite valve cover keeps dirt from accumulating when set on the ground
> - Keeps water cool in the summer
> - Somewhat difficult to fill in the field from a purifier pump
> - Lid forms a tight seal, sometimes it is difficult to turn
> Personal Comments
> The CamelBak StoAway does what it is intended to do, it keeps water
> from freezing during an average day hike, and, with precautions, will
> do so overnight as well. Additionally, the StoAway does a good job of
> of keeping water cool in the summer, with the addition of ice cubes.
> I would gladly recommend purchasing the StoAway if there is any
> concern about water freezing during a trip.
- Ray s edit is correct. It s is used solely as a contraction of it is . The possessive is its . Both Strunk and White s The Elements of Style and theMessage 2 of 10 , Sep 3, 2006View SourceRay's edit is correct. "It's" is used solely as a contraction of "it
is". The possessive is "its". Both Strunk and White's "The Elements
of Style" and the Oxford "Fowler's Modern English Usage" agree on
this point of usage.
Sorry to be acting like the grammar police. I'm able to restrain
myself in most cases, except for "it's / its" and "affect / effect /
impact" misuse. :-)
- OK, corrected the its issue as well. MikeMessage 3 of 10 , Sep 4, 2006View SourceOK, corrected the its issue as well.
On Aug 31, 2006, at 6:43 PM, rayestrella1 wrote:
> EDIT: OR - CamelBak StowAway - Mike Lipay
> Hi Mike,
> You may want to take a look at your HTML. I am viewing it on two
> computers and the "Review" section on both is crowded into a tiny
> column on the left. Give me a yell when you change it and I will
> take another look.
> Your edits follow,
> ***Fits CamelBak-compatible packs perfectly! Our StoAway slips
> easily into the hydration pocket of your backcountry pack, or use
> the convenient D-Rings to strap it anywhere. And, external access to
> the OMEGA fillport makes the StoAway a breeze to fill, keeping you
> out enjoying the snow longer.
> EDIT: Since you are obviously quoting the manufacturer you should
> say that somewhere. If those are your words you have a lot of
> projection going on. :-)
> ***Most people are familiar with bladders, or hydration packs, these
> EDIT: now you really are projecting, I bet even together you and I
> don't know most people… Can you reword this?
> ***These light-weight wonders have all but replaces the age-old
> EDIT: replaced
> ***However, unlike the canteens they replace, bladders (and their
> contents) suffer from exposure to the elements
> Comment: canteens and bottles being steel, aluminum and later
> plastic were effected by the elements also. Hence the insulated
> covers made for them.
> ***my local outfitter had its usual sale,
> EDIT: its
> ***I spotted the CamelBak StoAway with the other hydration packs and
> read its hang tag.
> EDIT: its
> ***Even my Ster-pen was difficult to use,
> EDIT: SteriPEN
> ***This is definately a bottle made more for chemical purification
> EDIT: definitely
> To read our reviews, please visit http://www.backpackgeartest.org/
> Yahoo! Groups Links
- Hi Mike, I just got back I town. Thanks for taking care of the edits. For some reason the table that you have your section titled Review is squashed to theMessage 4 of 10 , Sep 4, 2006View SourceHi Mike,
I just got back I town.
Thanks for taking care of the edits.
For some reason the table that you have your section titled Review is
squashed to the side. All of your other section tables are fine. Maybe
I can have someone else look at it to see if it is just my two
Does it layout right for you?
- I think it has to do with how wide your browser is, the words should wrap to the left of the photo until they reach the bottom, then expand to fill the areaMessage 5 of 10 , Sep 5, 2006View SourceI think it has to do with how wide your browser is, the words should
wrap to the left of the photo until they reach the bottom, then
expand to fill the area under the photo. On my browser the first line
reads "Bladders, or hydration packs, are not"
Then the third paragraph expands under the photo and ends with the
words "freezing, I couldn't"
On Sep 4, 2006, at 9:21 PM, rayestrella1 wrote:
> Hi Mike,
> I just got back I town.
> Thanks for taking care of the edits.
> For some reason the table that you have your section titled Review is
> squashed to the side. All of your other section tables are fine. Maybe
> I can have someone else look at it to see if it is just my two
> Does it layout right for you?
> To read our reviews, please visit http://www.backpackgeartest.org/
> Yahoo! Groups Links
- ... line ... If it looks OK to you go ahead and upload it. That one section is 1/3 the width of the other sections to me. We will see if anyone else notices itMessage 6 of 10 , Sep 5, 2006View Source--- In BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com, Mike <hiking@...> wrote:
> I think it has to do with how wide your browser is, the words should
> wrap to the left of the photo until they reach the bottom, then
> expand to fill the area under the photo. On my browser the first
> reads "Bladders, or hydration packs, are not"If it looks OK to you go ahead and upload it. That one section is 1/3
the width of the other sections to me. We will see if anyone else
notices it after it is uploaded.
You can put it here;