EDIT - Owner Review - RidgeRest - Josh Esteves
- Edit of Owner Review Therm-a-Rest RidgeRest
Hi Josh, you are just about finished with your review it's looking
very good. I have three edits and a suggestion that are all minor.
>Backpacking Background: I started backpacking five years ago, mostlysolo
>day hiking and overnight trips with a few multi day trips and one
>3 day trip. I started backpacking in the Ozark Mountains of Arkansasconsider
>and recently returned to California and have been hiking the coastal
>Santa Cruz Mountains and the Sierras. I started backpacking as a
>heavy weight ( over a 65# pack for a overnight trip) but now
>myself a lightweight backpacker ( 10-15# base weight). I have foundson
>that lightweight backpacking allows me to carry all my gear and my
>at the same time.### EDIT: The backpacking background looks good now. The only
thing I note is that there is an extra space after both beginning
parenthesis marks that needs removed.
>When rolled up inside my pack the sleeping pad's###EDIT: "slide" instead of "slid"
>texture allowed other gear to easily slid in and out of the pack
>without sticking to the pad.
>The RidgeRest is enough pad###COMMENT: Ah now that ties it together. Very good.
>to make the hard established sites bearable.
>The pad is a full body pad but can be cut down in size to save###EDIT and suggestion: I suggest removing the "also" before "has a
>weight. The pad also has a tendency to roll up when it is first laid
>out. Which can be fixed by throwing a sleeping bag on the pad or by
>laying the pad so it curves toward the ground.
tendency", since it really is a new thought. The sentence
beginning "which can be fixed" as it stands is an incomplete
sentence. You have two choices to fix it, the first being to tack
it onto the sentence before by changing the period to a comma and
changing "Which" to lower case. The second way to fix it would be
to change "Which" to "This".
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