Re: EDIT/APPROVAL: Owner Review Raven Pro Ice Axe - Ray Estrella
- --- In BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com, "edwardripleyduggan"
> Hello Ray,
> Maybe drop the periods at the end of the price and year lines for
> consistency (though leave it on the warranty, as that's a complete
> sentence). Otherwise, this still looks fine. Go ahead and upload.
> It's not sucky grammar, it's personal style. <g> Seriously, your
> reports are always fun to read.
I got rid of the periods, (I have no idea how they got there) and
uploaded it. Thanks for the help and the comment.