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Re: EDIT/APPROVAL: Owner Review Raven Pro Ice Axe - Ray Estrella

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  • rayestrella1
    ... Hi Ted, I got rid of the periods, (I have no idea how they got there) and uploaded it. Thanks for the help and the comment. Ray
    Message 1 of 8 , Jun 5, 2006
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      --- In BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com, "edwardripleyduggan"
      <erd@...> wrote:
      >
      > Hello Ray,
      >
      > Maybe drop the periods at the end of the price and year lines for
      > consistency (though leave it on the warranty, as that's a complete
      > sentence). Otherwise, this still looks fine. Go ahead and upload.
      >
      > It's not sucky grammar, it's personal style. <g> Seriously, your
      > reports are always fun to read.

      Hi Ted,

      I got rid of the periods, (I have no idea how they got there) and
      uploaded it. Thanks for the help and the comment.

      Ray
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