EDIT/APPROVAL: REPOST OWNER REVIEW- La Sportiva Makalus - Seth
- Seth -
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OWNER REVIEW - La Sportiva Makalus
***EDIT: I missed this first time around, but it looks like the
official name is "Makalu" (which you used correctly throughout the
rest of the review); please change it here to "La Sportiva Makalu
Mountaineering Boots" or "La Sportiva Makalu Boots"
Twice it is tastefully imbossed within the leather on either side of
the ankle, and the third is on the tongue.
The elevation where I hike ranges from about 2000 ft (610 m) to over
8000 ft (2438
m) with summer temperatures ranging from 70 f (21.11 c) to about 90 f
***EDITS: Capitalize "C" and "F" for temperatures; add a period at the
end of the sentence
Even the sole (which is a Vibram sole, they
have since switched to a Skywalk MPE sole) has stood up good to the
hiking I have put these through.
***EDIT: "stood up well"
***EDIT SUGGESTION: Consider breaking up your text into several
paragraphs when you create the HTML, which will make it easier to read.