EDIT: REPOST-Owner Review-Metzeler Thermo Mat- Ralph Ditton
- Looks great, Ralph. Especially the pictures.
I have a question for you before I make your upload folder. The
website calls the mats "thermomats" all in one word with no
capitalizations. Please verify if this is one or two words on your
documentation and send the answer to the list. Thanks.
I have a couple of edits for you as well. After I've made your
folder, you've encorporated these changes and you've tried the new
copy in the TEST folder, you'll be ready to upload. No need to
repost. Another OR well done.
You've got the spacing figured out in the FEATURES section, but now
each sentence is on a new line. Please remove these hard breaks so
the lines flow together and form paragraphs. Feel free to contact me
directly if you have problems.
> * I have left the mat inflated with the valve closed inside atent on a very hot day. The mat did not burst or delaminate
ie.separation of the fabric from the foam
EDIT: I missed this earlier. Please remove the "I have" so this
bullet starts "Left the mat..." This will then parallel the other
> * Sat on the mat near a campfire. The mat did not over-pressurized, burst or delaminate
EDIT: extra spaces between "not over-" and "burst or"
EDIT: remove the "-ed" on pressurized: "The mat did not over-
That's it! Christine