EDIT OR - REI Lightweight MTS Long Sleeve Crew - Phillip Engle
- OR - REI Lightweight MTS Long Sleeve Crew - Phillip Engle
You have me again. Sad :-)
A trifle short, especially in the Product Description area. Apart from the
web site stuff you seem to have covered everything else. Some small edits
Now, when you have fixed these could you REPOST to this channel and also put
the html version in the test/OR folder please.
This is your second OR? I trust you have sent your Tester Agreement to Shane
> Product informationEDITS:
You don't mention the REI web site at all, and whether you relied on it for
your purchasing decision or whether you went into an REI shop to check it
out 'in your hand'. It is normal to mention something about this. (Me, I
prefer to actually handle clothing before I buy it.)
You mention 'synthetic', but usually the vendors trumpets the (superior)
type of synthetic as well. Any info about what sort of synthetic?
Colours available? Sizes available?
This section needs some more beef.
> Now the not so good news. This shirt holds on to body odor like a thruhiker holds on
> to their last package of ramen.EDIT: 'holds on to his last package'. 'Their' is plural. 'His' can mean male
> When I wore this shirt as an undershirt at work I had to goComment: wow!
> home at lunch to change. The stench got so bad after two days in the
> Grand Canyon I couldnt bear to have it in the tent at nightEDIT: missing apostrophe in couldn't
> experience the smell is gone with one washing, but thats little comfort onthe trail.
EDIT: missing apostrophe in that's
> Even though white, this shirt remains stain-free.EDIT: I suggest 'this shirt has remained stain-free'