Re: EDIT: Amanda, OR: Wolf Packs Reflector Dog Pack
- Hi Amanda,
Looks pretty good! Two microscopic changes I'd like to suggest.
Height: 5'4" (1.6 m)
### Height 5' 4" (1.6 m) (space between feet and inches is pretty
customary--looks better in HTML, too.
Manufacturer: Wolf Packs, Inc
Year of manufacture: 1999
### Something went wrong with the line spacing here. Too much space
after the heading. Also, I'd prefer not to see a blank line between
each of the three list items, in order to make it uniform with your
other lists. I looked at the HTML and you have an extra <br> (line
break) tag after product info, and after the first two items. Take
these out and that should fix it. Thanks.
Oops, you didn't change pack cloth. Well, the OED says pack-cloth;
however both that, packcloth and pack cloth seem to be in currency, so
take your pick. I would personally say either of the first two are
preferable but this seems in fact a style issue.
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