EDIT: BA Insulated Air Core FR - Fuzzy
sorry I'm a bit slow with these edits - my ISP decided to help out with my
backlog by keeping all email from me for the last couple of days :-(
No edits as such, but a couple of small suggestions that I think could make
a good report even better.
>Big Agnes Insulated Air Core Sleeping Padsuggestion: I think this first night when you were cold, was the "control"
>Field Report August 20, 2004
>I returned a week ago from a week of Boy Scout Summer Camp, where I
>used the pad every night but the first (needed a control for
>comparison). Overnight temperatures ranged from upper 40's to mid
>50's F (9 13 C). All nights were spent with my Snugpak sleeping
>bag. The first night I slept in a standard Boy Scout canvas tent on
>a nylon military-style cot with just my sleeping bag. I slept a bit
>cold that night, with the air flowing under the cot, and found there
night, without the BA pad; but if someone was scanning the report, they
could easily miss the mention above that you didn't use the pad this first
night. I'd suggest re-writing this to make it clearer that the night when
you were cold was a "control".
>closer to the foot of the cot. Fortunately, the contact was slickcomment: although this showed up nicely as a paragraph break in the email,
>enough for me to pull myself back to the head without getting up.
>The other indignity I subjected the pad to came on the morning I woke
>up in the hammock. I deflated the pad to make it a little easier to
it doesn't in the html. Because you're used <tr>s rather than paragraphs,
there's no visual separation between paragraphs, and this one (where the
photo occurs) feels like a very very long paragraph, and is hard to read.
It would be good to put some visible break in here.
Actually, the first paragraph ("I returned from a week ...... without
getting up) is pretty long on its own - you might consider breaking it up
into multiple paras - but that's definitely a style choice for you to make.
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> Chuck,with my
> sorry I'm a bit slow with these edits - my ISP decided to help out
> backlog by keeping all email from me for the last couple of days :-(could make
> No edits as such, but a couple of small suggestions that I think
> a good report even better.Thank you, sir. Suggestions incorporated, upload pending repair to
Fuzzy (Chuck Kime)