> Thanks to the editor who picks this up. Your patience with my ORs isMany thanks for this interesting review of a unique product Rick. I have
very little for you to do and when you've fixed it if you post back with
REPOST in the subject heading we'll get it uploaded,
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> Mapdanna AT-1### although my dictionary gives '-danna' and '-dana' Antigravity's site
> Trail Map on a Bandanna
> Appalachian Trail Map #1
> Owner Review by Rick Allnutt
spells them 'Mapdana' and 'bandana' so I think you've got to adopt their
spelling throughout your review.
### I think this is a bit too much information for a title so you should
reduce this to 'Mapdana AT-1' however, as this is not an easily
identifiable product (tent, backpack, stove etc), how would you feel
about including the extra information (even expanding it a little to
describe succinctly what the product is) under 'Product Information'?
> and contacted Antigravity Gear to find out if there were any knownthe trail.)
> errors on the Mapdanna before taking off down the trail in mid-May,
> 2004. I was told of two errors, involving mileage in the Smoky
> Mountains before I left. (I discovered a couple additional errors on
### this might just be our different usage but I'd write this as '...(I
discovered a couple of additional errors while on the trail)...'
> Mapdanna AT-1 has a map section and a data guide section. The mapwhich
> section is a near copy of the National Park Service map of the AT,
> is available at several Internet sites. This map shows the roads andnorth
> towns near the trail and serves to keep me oriented to the part of the
> country I am walking through. When I have been walking south-east for
> several hours, like happens northbound from Standing Indian Mountain,
> it is reassuring to see the trail will be swinging back toward the
> star (geographic north) before long.### COMMENT: I did just wonder how much this was like a map, with
contours, grid lines, peaks heights etc?
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