Re:REPOST:MSR Dragonfly Stove OR:JOHN
- Thanks for posting back John. Good work, we're getting close. There's a
couple of things you missed which I've noted below. It's a good idea to read
through your review (or even better, get someone else too if possible) a
couple of times as I think some of things are just typo's etc. that you've
missed in your haste.
You need to correct these and REPOST for (hopefully :) the last time and
we'll get this one put to bed,
BGT Edit Moderator
> Email address:<<mailto:JEMusserATsbcglobalDOTnet>mailto:JEMusserATsbcglobalDOTnet>jemusser
### you seem to have your e-mail addy in duplicate
> on a primitive trip. Forecast temps: lo/60f - hi/80 f (lo/15.5 c - hi/26.7### you might remember that I said the only abbreviations that required
> c). Actual temps: lo/20 f - high/30 f (lo/-6.7 c hi/-1.1 c) and blowing
> snow. We packed it in and I haven't convinced her to schedule another trip
> into the snow country.
capitalisation were proper names so these temperatures should be written 20
F and 6.7 C etc.
### we only need the top level URL. Pages can change but the main site
usually stays the same, so this should be:
http://www.msrcorp.com and we do not need it in duplicate
> MSR is well known in for outdoor equipment from the simple backpacker up### should this be '..well known for outdoor...'?
> I have had my Dragonfly since February 2001. At the time of purchase, Iwas
> more than a little concerned about the weight of the entire assembly since### as you already say '...At the time of purchase...' you can delete the
> at the time I was going through major pains to reduce the carry weight of
second '...at the time...'
> fuel cylinder 11.5 oz (340 ml) with 8 oz (0.2 l). The amount of fuel used### you have an additional '...but one...' in here
> to fill the bottle is arbitrary but one, but one that I have become
> accustomed, making fuel management easier to keep track of. I fill the### should be '...accustomed to...'
> temperature of 76 f (42.2 c) the water boils in 1 minute 48 seconds to a### temperatures should be written 76 F and 42.2 C etc. and it should be
> full rolling boil. When the outdoor the outdoor temperature drops to 42 f
> (5.6 c) degrees the boiling time increased to 2 minutes 30 seconds. MSR
'...boiling time increases...'
That's it John, I look forward to your REPOST,
BGT Edit Moderator
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