EDIT;OWNER REVIEW;Sierra Designs Clip Flashlight CD2:CRAIG
- Hi Craig,
This is an excellent first review. You seem to have everything in place and
I have very little for you to do. Below are my edits and suggestions and
when you've worked on these, if you post back with REPOST in the subject
heading, I'll give it another read through and give you a folder to upload
Many thanks again for a fine review,
BGT Edit Moderator
> Product Description (note: final version will include a photo of the### In case you aren't aware, for copyright and other reasons, we only allow
the use of reviewers own photographs
>### does it have a sewn-in groundsheet/floor? If so, you should mention (and
> The tent has a sage green lower body, a strip of no-see-um mesh around
> the two long sides and the back end, and a white top. The white top
> allows good light into the tent, which makes it feel roomier. There is
> a large door on the front end, also made of no-see-um mesh. The rain
> fly is a slightly lighter sage green. All guy-outs and zipper pulls
> have reflective material.
describe ) it here in your Product Description and should '...have
reflective material...' be '...are of reflective material...'?
> The Clip Flashlight is not a freestanding tent.### If you've possibly read any of my edits of other tent reviews, you may
have gathered that I like the reader to know whether the tent pitches inner
or fly first. This is an important consideration is some parts of the world.
Reading your review, one can deduce that the tent is pitched inner first and
the fly thrown over afterwards, but I'd like it if you could make this a
clearer right at the start so that someone reading it will get this
information at the beginning.
> The two poles arch### might it be more appropriate to say that '...the tent attaches to the
> from one side of the tent to the other, one at the front and one at
> the back, and are attached to the tent with "c" clips.
poles with "c" clips...'
> Trip 1, Sipsey Wilderness, April 2002, 2 nights: The weather was clear### when being approximate, a rough round figure is good enough so '...(24
> and dry, with daytime temperatures around 75 degrees Fahrenheit (23.89
> Centigrade) and nighttime temperatures around 40 degrees Fahrenheit
> (4.44 Centigrade).
C) and (4 C)...'
> The Clip Flashlight is marketed as a two-person tent, but I would### should be '...keeping my pack...' (you should keep to the first person)
> consider it more of a large one-person tent. I have not shared it with
> another person, but I have shared it with all of my gear. The extra
> space inside is useful for keeping your pack out of the weather,
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