Thanks for your Owner Review, Tom. This reminds me that I need a new
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Reviews > Sleep Gear > Sleeping Bags > Western Mountaineering
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> Listed Weight: ?
EDIT: Did you mean to fill this in?
> 10 lightweight bivies on technical
COMMENT: Is the plural of bivy bivies or bivys?
> at 30 degs F (zero degs C).
COMMENT: You can leave out the `degs'. Also, you should use numbers
consistently. `30', `0'.
> a foam pad and thermarest, I slept
> perhaps the 4 am chills were getting me,
> sleep and slept through till 8 am.
> Since the bag has a 20-degree F (-7 deg C) rating
EDIT: Again, consistency. `degree', `deg', above `degs'. You can
leave that out.
> The current model is 4 ozs (110 grams)
EDIT: Consistency of abbreviations. `ounces', `grams', `oz', `g'.