Re: [BackpackGearTest] EDIT- Jeff Widman Cloudviel Four Shadows Beanie Initial Report
I noticed two items in your edit that I'm not sure about. I'm looking for
either a second opinion, or for the reasoning behind the edit.
I'm also just about to repost an updated copy of the report. Though you
asked me to just upload the corrected report, I wanted to be sure my
comments on the price-value argument are not projecting, yet still
adequately expressing the issue.
> expensive, but my experience so far confirms that it is a great fabric.I'm not so sure about this. It doesn't seem to need a comma; at least, I
> Edit- Comma after far
cannot think of any rule that requires a comma. Should I change it to read,
", but so far my experience confirms that it is a great fabric." ?
> I hate over-designed, overweight, "bombproof" gear almost asI put a space between "over" and "weight." It's a compound adjective, just
> much as I love useful
> Edit - space between over and weight.
Let me know,