RE: [BackpackGearTest] Cache Lake Food Field Report
- Thanks Bill!
see below for my edits/comments
Cache Lake Foods Monitor
-Comment: Did you happen to find all the items were accurate in manufacture's claimed weight?
>Temperatures ranged from 60* F to 30* F (16* C to -1* C) with-EDIT: The wind portion doesn't read quite smoothly to me - perhaps add 'range'? - "with windS in the 15 to 25 MPH range" or "with winds ranging from 15 to 25 MPH"
>wind in the 15 to 25 MPH (24 to 40 kmh).
>All meals were cooked on aComment: Change 'a' to "an' in front of MSR - "All meals were cooked on an MSR..."
>MSR Pocket Rocket (http://www.msrcorp.com) using GSI Outdoors
>(http://www.gsioutdoors.com) 5 piece Hard Anodized cook set.
>Fryin' Pan Biscuits `n Gravy:-EDIT: I assume you ment 'is supposed to serve two' :) and not server two :)
>is supposed to server two and fed my 13 year old son and me well.
>Caramel Breakfast Fryin' Pan Bread:Comment: Perhaps add 'both' to this sentance for smoother reading - "Determining when to flip and actually flippoing the bread was problematic for us with BOTH this product and the Pizza..."
>Determining when to flip and actually flipping
>the bread was problematic for us with this product and the Pizza
>Fryin' Pan Bread.
>At this point, you have your caramel mixture isEDIT - remove 'is' - "At this point, you have your caramel mixture on the bottom..."
>on the bottom of the pan while you continue to cook the bread.
>All refuse was 3 plastic packages thatComment - make the sentance all past or all present tense - "All refuse was 3 plastic packages that were..." or "All refuse is 3 plastic packages that are..."
>are easily collapsed and packed out.
>The tasteComment - perhaps edit the sentance for smoother reading - recommendation - 'The taste was of dark turkey meat, which was confirmed by referencing the ingredient list. The main ingredient was turkey thigh meat.'
>was of dark turkey meat, which was confirmed by the ingredient
>listing turkey thigh meat.
>This product is high in sodium (460mg) withComment - perhaps add nutritional info/comments to other food products for consistency?
>30mg cholesterol, 4g fat (1g saturated), 1g carbohydrate, and 7g
>TheSmart A** Comment: :P you are much too kind to not question *why* you shouldn't heat it in a conventional oven...much less how you were going to tote a conventional oven along for preparations :P
>Turkey Italian Sausage must not be heated in a conventional oven.
>The sauce was VERYComment: change individuals to individual - "...to fit individual preferences"
>spicy and overwhelming - so overwhelming that I would recommend
>packaging straight tomato sauce and separate spice packages to fit
>Total refuse was the 3 plastic packages thatComment - make all past or present tense
>are easily collapsible and packed out.