RE: [BackpackGearTest] REQUEST for Consructive Criticism
> I think my writing needs some sprucing up. I would love to getI'll be glad to play this game Heather, but give me a few days. One thing I
> some off-list constructive criticism!
> What do you like about the way I write reports? What do you abhor?
> What's lacking? Do I go overboard? Would you like to see pictures?
> What's on your mind?
would like to know... I've been reading little bits of your Long Trail
Journal, and you say that your filter exploded.
What filter was this? Can you define 'exploded'?