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RE: [BackpackGearTest] REQUEST for Consructive Criticism

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  • Shane Steinkamp
    ... I ll be glad to play this game Heather, but give me a few days. One thing I would like to know... I ve been reading little bits of your Long Trail
    Message 1 of 2 , Oct 31, 2002
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      > I think my writing needs some sprucing up. I would love to get
      > some off-list constructive criticism!
      >
      > What do you like about the way I write reports? What do you abhor?
      > What's lacking? Do I go overboard? Would you like to see pictures?
      > What's on your mind?

      I'll be glad to play this game Heather, but give me a few days. One thing I
      would like to know... I've been reading little bits of your Long Trail
      Journal, and you say that your filter exploded.

      What filter was this? Can you define 'exploded'?

      Shane
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