EDIT - Re: RON - Pac-Flat Backpacker's Barbecue Grill
- Hi Ron
Not sure if you have had a editorial review of your report or note. If you
have and there is nothing new here, please just ignore me.
At 04:43 AM 19/09/2002, you wrote:
>INITIAL COOKING TRIAL# I think "send" should be "sent" in this sentence.
>My first time flipping the burger send the grill and burger flying;
>after that I learned to steady the grill during the flips.
>The burgers produced much less grease and splatter than I expected - due# I think you need a "the" between "of [and] heat distributor" in the
>to the even cooking of heat distributor, most of the meat's juices were
>locked inside, making the burgers quite tasty when it came time for
sentence above, i.e., it should read "due to the even cooking of THE heat
distributor, most of the meat's ... "
>INITIAL CLEANING# I suggest you change "used" to "use" in the above sentence.
>Attempts to used a paper towel to brush off the residue were
>FIELD TESTS# I suggest you include the word "enough" between "high AND to" in the
>On the other hand, a wind screen which surrounded the grill and was
>high to shield both the stove and grill together directed heat so well
>that we needed to be very careful to not burn things.
above sentence, i.e., "... an was high ENOUGH to shield both the stove and
the grill ..."
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- 10/2/02 3:55:05 AM, Andrew Priest <apriest@...> wrote:
>Hi RonGood grief. Some of this stuff is left over from my initial report. Something else to get fixed...
>Not sure if you have had a editorial review of your report or note. If you
>have and there is nothing new here, please just ignore me.